Check out our first finished short.
We made it for the Dudly (we arnt from there) 48hr film making competition. It had to be 5 minutes long. The name of their choice...the style of their choice and have a certain line in it.
Take a look and ANY feed back is welcome.
http://www.theadders.com/fandjsmall.wmv
Our short - fanny and jonny
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RE: Our short - fanny and jonny
Guy with the long hair in the beginning reminded me of Pulp Fiction (John Travolta). The name Johnny is pretty gangster stereotypical though. The mafeup FX of Johnny were good though. Also the thing in the chest reminded me of Pulp Fiction, so I'm guessing you wanted it to kinda be like it. The gun shot wasn't loud so you could have made it louder. Although these are minor problems, the short was pretty good.
Didn't see what you said so some of the problems probably weren't problems kuz of the competition materials.
Didn't see what you said so some of the problems probably weren't problems kuz of the competition materials.
Yeah we paid homage to everything from Godfather to the Simpsons.
Our actor with long hair has long hair naturally and we didnt really mean that bit to be pulp fictionish.
Yeah I agree about the first gunshot but it was 2am when i did the edit and we had to get the thing finished. I am pretty happy with it overall though.
Our actor with long hair has long hair naturally and we didnt really mean that bit to be pulp fictionish.
Yeah I agree about the first gunshot but it was 2am when i did the edit and we had to get the thing finished. I am pretty happy with it overall though.