New Short Script: Maybe a feature

Themovieman44 · Post by **Themovieman44** » Mon Feb 23, 2004 6:00 pm

I have this new idea for something I have never written. A western, what I see is in the old west having either a brother sister team, or a brother brother team. They go out to get vengence on the cowboys that killed their parents. I dont know its a work in progress. Any ideas?????

Raptor · Post by **Raptor** » Mon Feb 23, 2004 8:26 pm

Cherokee Kid...

ALthough it takes a while there for the brother/brother connection to be made...

Spike · Post by **Spike** » Tue Feb 24, 2004 4:52 pm

i love westerns, so i would encourage you to do it..... you know it would actually be really cool to see a reservoir dogs kinda western if ya know what i mean!! in stead of just making just any cowboy movie, make it a little special!!

Themovieman44 · Post by **Themovieman44** » Tue Feb 24, 2004 5:30 pm

Well I was kinda thinking like Natural Born Killers gone west. along that line

Spike · Post by **Spike** » Tue Feb 24, 2004 8:40 pm

yeah that sounds pretty cool...

Jass Films · Post by **Jass Films** » Wed Feb 25, 2004 12:39 am

I hope you are aware how hard hard it is to write a good script. You need to have continuing storyline that doesn't become boring. Think carefully about your topic and storyline. And Research, Research, Research. That way you'll know what your writing about and will make the story much more readable.

Grant · Post by **Grant** » Wed Feb 25, 2004 11:07 am

like a western Bonnie & Clyde?

Themovieman44 · Post by **Themovieman44** » Wed Feb 25, 2004 1:41 pm

Yeah you could say that, Bonnie and Clyde, Natural Born Killers, pretty much the murderous rampage films gone western.

lethelgirth87 · Post by **lethelgirth87** » Wed Feb 25, 2004 7:06 pm

Or.....you could create a whole new western superhero. Thats just my 2 cents

Themovieman44 · Post by **Themovieman44** » Thu Feb 26, 2004 5:59 pm

That could always be cool. THis is still in development so I need any suggestions you guys may have.