Concept Choreography

[Bocca]

So hi....

This is technically my first post (but before i was Jowka...but then i lost the password ...blahblah)

so anyway, in the woods...Fight Scene

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BkKwnB8LnY4

It seems pretty meaningless, but this is a rough screentest for a scene in a movie im writing. Needed to check locations and move pheasibility(sp?).

Theres no sound 'cuz i had a backing track but dont have permission to use it etc. etc. (Its Bodies by Drowning Pool...)

And towards the end the cuts are diabolical, but I lost some footage and pieced it together as best as possible...

C&C, por favor.

[ctbullet]

that was sweet as,

gd cuts, good acting, good fight choreography

actually one of the best fight scenes i've seen on here, would be 10times better with sound though

[Bocca]

when i get round to it, ill render another edit without the backing track and post-it up...

Stuck revising for the GCSEs at the moment


Thanks for the positive comment

[chrisgreen]

Great choreography, the cuts towards the end weren't as good, but as ctbullet said, definatly one of the best on here

[Bocca]

thanks , the cuts were poor because i lost some footage, got real p*ssed about that lol