Vinsore: The Fight Survival

rhys · Post by **rhys** » Sat Apr 29, 2006 11:19 am

Hey i have made the last fight scene for my movie!
Dont be mean, just say what could be better.
It looks heaps better higher quality.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=itJ7P8liOjk

britishbulldog · Post by **britishbulldog** » Sat Apr 29, 2006 11:37 am

i liked it, but you always seem to miss out sound effects

ctbullet · Post by **ctbullet** » Sat Apr 29, 2006 12:49 pm

the cuts seemed a bit off, at times it was hard to follow what actually happened.....and yeh there was like 2 sound effects throughout.....needs a little work

Zacatac927 · Post by **Zacatac927** » Sat Apr 29, 2006 2:22 pm

ok well i have a thing for you.... have three different shots and then film the entire thing three times for each camera angle. then after work on some closeups.... so then you have an easier cut and it doesn't look like everthing is staged

Bodysnatcher · Post by **Bodysnatcher** » Sat Apr 29, 2006 3:14 pm

much better, the editing needs alittle work but it is shaping up nicely. drop a line to Theshapecool (on this site) he made a tutorial for his Gothic Punisher film and there was a nice way for fight scenes in there, it might help you loads?

Zac · Post by **Zac** » Mon May 01, 2006 7:30 am

HA,HA,HA! joking chill. it looked real funny at the start where your walking down being all serious and then your dog walks down the path, it also walks past when your on the trampoline, i'd recommend tying her up or something. yeh, also some of the cuts looked really far apart (especially the one where you stab her or wat ever, then your suddenly running at the tramp). to improve those, when you film an individual shot start doing stuff a bit earlier and go later than the shot is intended to be. dont just start the shot exactly where the last one finnished. then you can stretch them a bit further forward and back in editing if you need to.
but over-all i thought it was good, mostly the lightning effect things and the part with the lense flare and you sort of teloported or whatever. except it was sort of confusing how you were walking down and you just stood there then the music changed and you charge up the thing and teloport, then punch at the camera and suddenly theres this chick there.
hope this isnt TOO mean for you.

P.S when do we get to see the whole movie?

rhys · Post by **rhys** » Thu May 04, 2006 10:35 am

Uh zac, it takes a while to make a movie as you should know (your mental one). It was just a test for a last fight scene (i am going to try a few) and not the final copy, but i will not kill her she needs to live. Uh zac, dont 'reccomend' starting the shot before it should be there and i have been doing it longer than you have. I did film it before and then i edited some out so im just in frame, because no one wants to see a trampoline for 3 seconds before anything happens.

rhys · Post by **rhys** » Thu May 04, 2006 10:36 am

Oh yeah, there were nine sound effects not 2, turn ur volume up.

ctbullet · Post by **ctbullet** » Thu May 04, 2006 11:43 am

sibling / cousin rivalry i see here, 9 sound my a$$, any 9 is nothing i could put in 9 effects in under 5s and it isn't excessive

Zac · Post by **Zac** » Thu May 04, 2006 12:18 pm

no, not a shot of the trampoline. the shot BEFORE it. after you stab her, your still bent down with watever you stabbed her with at her stomach and then suddenly your running at the trampoline. you should have had a shot of you bending back up then run off screen.

Mr.Anderson · Post by **Mr.Anderson** » Fri May 05, 2006 4:11 am

That poor girl, he just starts beating the s*** out of her for no reason. Ha, anyways not too bad. The cuts would be ok, if the choreography and camera angles were done a little better. More blocking and fistfighting would be an improvement.

rhys · Post by **rhys** » Sat May 20, 2006 2:05 am

Hey, i agree with half of the things u have said so i re-edited it and will put it on the net asap.

Bocca · Post by **Bocca** » Sun May 21, 2006 11:31 am

i liked it, (didnt have sound though).

Some of the cuts were a little off, but with practice thatll improve.

(just out of interest how old are you guys?)

and i really liked the energy ball effect thing with the lens flare, excellent