S.T.O.R.M (super team of renegade mercenaries) trailer

[britishbulldog]

first thing I've ever posted on here, its a trailer for a film i'm working on, put together by my film editor

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=46btrfWvLCI


its a spoof action film I posted the script on here a few weeks ago

comments please

[NGFilms03]

Looks cool, pretty funny.
Can't wait to see the whole film.

Did Holywell have any idea you were filming at the school?

[ctbullet]

from what i saw i hvae noticed that you have no idea about tactical movements and operations,

is this the comic side because if it is then good job....i would have put a fake plate on the car or blur it just in case

[justin!butcher]

Haha, Im praying that that was supposed to be funny ; )
Looked good if it was : )

[britishbulldog]

ok im guessing the guy that commented on Holywell went there so who are you ?

and yer me and my buddy work there and got permission from our boss

secondly, no we have no idea about tactical movements so it adds to the humour

[NGFilms03]

Yep, I went to Hollywell.
Matt Tindall?? I'm at Wootton now...
I recognised a few cast members in the trailer, so who are you?

[britishbulldog]

Andrew Gilbert I'm in year 12 the one that says o cr** I'm not happy with my delivery lol

[NGFilms03]

That's cool, mate. Didn't know anyone else at school was into film making and stuff. Feel like checking out some of my stuff and letting me know what you think? If you browse through the Member's Film pages you'll probably find Bamboozle and Tough World...

[britishbulldog]

i watched sanquinary man (if thats what its called) a while ago i thought it was excellent i'll have a look later as i dont have much time, hope you dont mind i added you on msn from the account given on your profile

[NGFilms03]

Nah, I don't mind but that's my old account. Add x__atouchoverrated@hotmail.co.uk instead (2 underscores).

[freed]

Tell your ''editor'' not use Windows movie maker 2, especially when cutting trailers.

As for the initial trailer, it wasn't pieced together well, nor did it build an tension or excitement.

There wasn't any change at all, which i thought would of helped. We also didn't learn anything from the trailer, than it's group of people randomly running around.

[britishbulldog]

we do have some better software he just hasn't used it yet, and we still have to film alot of the scenes at the begining which we could add into the official trailer in the way of a storyline once we have filmed the scenes

[Bodysnatcher]

I found it made me smile more than I am prepared to admit, the para landing needs much more work but I asume that will be one of the scenes you will be filming? as far as it went for a trailer, you needto have more of the story in there, as it was I must agree with 'freed':

There wasn't any change at all, which i thought would of helped. We also didn't learn anything from the trailer, than it's group of people randomly running around.

would like to see you develope the trailer more, nice choice of music though.