Training 2 / Shooting Short Film

rhys · Post by **rhys** » Tue Apr 18, 2006 11:26 am

Hey i made a number 2 of the training thing, this time it took 8 mins includig editing and special effects.

rhys · Post by **rhys** » Tue Apr 18, 2006 1:04 pm

OOPS needa link:
http://youtube.com/watch?v=3isO61N5AEc

Zac · Post by **Zac** » Tue Apr 18, 2006 1:08 pm

What the hell is he supposed to be doin?

rhys · Post by **rhys** » Tue Apr 18, 2006 1:22 pm

It was a random fighting dude who got bored and decided to train a little bit and show off his moves.

Zacatac927 · Post by **Zacatac927** » Tue Apr 18, 2006 2:41 pm

ummm...... better editing.... speed up his fall and wall thing... also work on the muzzle flashes

ctbullet · Post by **ctbullet** » Tue Apr 18, 2006 4:18 pm

i thought you had skills, that roll and lean on the wall was shocking, sorry to say but not your best work

JackBauerII · Post by **JackBauerII** » Tue Apr 18, 2006 6:42 pm

Honestly, that was pretty lame. I agree with zacatac, the muzzle flashes could be worked on. More opacity, they looked too solid. As for the rolling thing, I thought it could use a little work.

aaronv2 · Post by **aaronv2** » Thu Apr 20, 2006 5:39 pm

Really? I thaught it was good.

rhys · Post by **rhys** » Fri Apr 21, 2006 10:25 am

Thanks arronv2, im not sure if that was a joke but thanks anyway, dont say it was a joke i dont care. I actually thing it was pretty bad too, i was goin to do a handstand then i realised i couldnt do it with one hand and fire a fake gun while leaning on a painting, it was bad ill do better when it will be in an actual movie, or i start to fully care, (im too tired

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ALove · Post by **ALove** » Fri Apr 21, 2006 10:28 am

If you know it's bad, why post it? Wait until you have something that you really worked hard on, and then put that up for criticisim.

rhys · Post by **rhys** » Fri Apr 21, 2006 10:34 am

sounds like a plan ill take your advice. i dont know why but lately my movies have just turned to mush. they used to have such passion, now its just like.... i have no inspiration.

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