"Zero PM"

[coldblue12]

i'am making film, and currently my budget is about $50 its a lock-stock style godfather film with a heavy mix on tarentino stuff. The story is about two colorful hitmen, who are hired by a crime boss to annhialate some people. The film shows two sides, the other side shows another set of hitmen who follow the same course, in the end the 2 stories are binded together revealing revenge, and destruction. The hitmen are both hired by the crimeboss to kill these 2 people, which reveal are the hitmen, so in the end both groups of hitmen are in a standoff. heres like 3 min of script jus basic back drop. Its pretty disturbing first 3min of script don't know if iam allowed to post it.

[crossfire]

seems sort of done before, revenge is getting used too much in my opinion these days in feature films. But it can still work, what it could lack in originaity it would gain in ... basically a good movie/script

[coldblue12]

well, heres the first 10-15min of script its still in heavy draft base. little violent and disturbing, advisory warning. First script. names are corny as well i will be a little bit more creative! stuff needs to make sense remember its only a draft. heistant about posting script don't know if its allowed


"Zero PM"

Screenplay by

Coldblue12

SHOOTING DRAFT

Chap1-The Grim Reaper

Ext. Car

neighborhood being passed by a car; a typical neighborhood.

Ext. back seat of vehicle camera focused on two men in the front.

Two men are driving by, very relaxed and happy. Both are caucasians, wearing dark clothing preferbally suits, or leather jackets with sunglasses. Driver is tapping the wheel listening to music(Zero PM- The Bellrays), the other man is tapping his leg. Both men look determined and very confident in their manner.

Ext. Front of a massive-size house

Car approaches down a steep narrow drive way. Zooms back to front of car, and the faces of the men are visible.

Valentino
So....what do you think Giovanni wants today?

Wallace
Except the usual.

INT. Office inside of House

Back Head of the a man sitting in a chair,is facing toward a glass door, the two previous men in the car are escorted inside by a bodyguard. glass door opens and the men walk inside. Valentino and Wallce both stand in front of the man(presumably Giovanni). Only the back of the man is visible. Valentino and Wallace both glance at him, and sit down on the seats set in front of them.

Wallace
So....what can we do for you today?

Giovanni
wait!......close your eyes and listen, and caress the sounds of life.

INT. Front of two glass doors

camera fades and slowley zooms into two glass doors, in the distance the sounds of a tortured man ruptures in the distance(possibly inside the room, but the camera never goes inside of room only glancing at doors), and at the same time an Opera piece is playing as well. Giovannis voice is speaking in perfect harmony of the screams of the tortured man. This is what he says,

Giovanni (V.O)
Ahh yes....this is happiness.Happiness the tranquility of life, the proximity of human nature, the neccesity of living. It is the breif existance that man desires.(Giovannis voice begins to become a bit ferocious).CAN YOU HEAR THE SOULS NEED TO LIVE!!!! CAN YOU COMPENSATE!!!!!!!


INT. Office inside of House
Sounds of tortured men begin to fade as multiple gunshots are rung in the air. Giovanni takes a Handkerchief and dabs his face still his features are not visible. A man walks into the room and hands Giovanni a towel that is stained red, possibly the blood of the previous man. Giovanni picks the towel and smells it, exhaling deeply. The Camera is still placed behind Giovannis head so only the hair is visible.

Giovanni(camera is focused on his mouth only)
Iam Hell......and you are my Gatekeepers.

Screen fades Black, as Opera piece abruptly stops.


INT. Car
Car of the previous men, drives by several houses. camera is locked on front two seats of vehicle.

Valentino
This guy is one serious mofo, screw up and your gonna get *****


Wallace
yeah...... You know all these chinks got one thing in common.... can you guess it?

Valentino
How to higher screw ups like us?

Wallace
Nah, bad taste in clothing, always wearing those armanis, even movies tend to make it cheezy, they should wear something different...... like purple shirts, and polka-dotted pants.

Valentino
Thats real intimidating.

(Both men chuckle)

Valentino molds his hands onto something in his pocket, camera immediatly switches to his face

INT.Giovanni's house(flashback)

Giovannis hand reaches out and gives Valentino a black object, looks quite like a tape recorder. (Giovanni taps the tap recorder as he is saying his line).

Giovanni
While you're doing your job, this should be turned on always..... You both may leave.

Valentino hesitantly grabs the tape recorder and snuffs it into his pockets. both men stand up and are escorted out the door by a bodyguard.

Bodyguard
There is a local buisness man, by the name of Juniper he runs a computer store between 4 and 8th you can tell he is a crook just by smelling him. I want you to take him out... take him out good!.... Him and Giovanni are real close,but once you **** up their ain't no going back.His mouth better not run again. Here is a pic for reference.(Wallace grabs the picture and examines it careful).

Wallace
This guys face looks like someone stuck a banana up his ***

Valentino
Better yet his grandma stuck the banana up his ***


INT. Car(present day)
Camera is focusing on the face of Valentino he sighs, and shurgs his shoulders.(Screen fades to Black).