New action-thriller idea!

[movie_freak2]

I have come up with a new idea. I haven't written the script yet, bet here's the story.

A small chain of mastermind thiefs in Russia rob banks and hack into people's accounts. The Spetsnaz get involved, but by the time they get to the places the money is hiding, it's gone! The group smuggles the money and gold into different locations across America. It now becomes an international crisis. The NSA (national security agency) then becomes involved to stop the group. They are worried if the keep robbing, it will close down many businesses.

[movie_freak2]

sorry to double post, but does anyone like it?!!

[mickcar73]

It seems a bit bland. U should make a character or a situation with the gold where something happens and blah blah blah with with car chases,guns and a detective or someone trying to find them

[Clarence]

I like the idea. Could be developed a bit more, yes, but it's a good plot. Are the mastermind theifs murderers as well? They could leave a duffle bag that looks like it's filled with money, but it's really a bomb...

[crossfire]

or a body... its ok i guess, it can look very good and feel good too if u make it well, but its been done before

[movie_freak2]

mickcar73- I was going to add in all that stuff when I actually write it!

Clarence- Umm, I don't know if they are murderers, I was kind of thinking about having a hostage or something. Not sure yet. The duffle bag idea is awesome!! Thank you!