comedy Heist movie

[Mr.Anderson]

This is just the script for a short movie we're planning to do this summer, just let me know what you think, if its funny or not. I'll be playing Cameron.


















"BOTCHED"


Written by

[Matthew Anderson]























FADE IN:
(THE SCREEN IS BLACK WE HEAR A MANS VOICE)

MAN
Alright, I know this is the first time we’ve ever done this, even…anything like this. But I’m not tryin to bring ya down, this is supposed to be a pep talk,
We now see the man talking to a group of guys at a table at a restaurant or diner.
my point is that if we coordinate this, do it professionally with effective leadership…we can actually pull this thing off. I mean c’mon, its obviously not impossible guys like us have robbed banks before.
ANOTHER GUY
But didn’t most of those guys end up dying in a shootout with police.
MAN
Ok, Christ Phil…I’m trying to give a pep talk here, I cant really “pepâ€

[Mr.Anderson]

Thanks for all the replies....please dont let its length put you off. It only takes about 20-30min max to read. All my friends who have read it so far think its hilarious, i just would really to like to get some other film makers opinions.

[OutcastJiob]

LOL. Yeah, I love it! Hilarious, good luck with the project ^_^

[Mr.Anderson]

thanks, we're gonna start filming it in 3 days (June 27-30) ill see if i can post once we're done. If i cant post the movie, then ill at least post some screenshots/pictures of it.

[naflish]

haha.. from the script it is hilarious.. and silly.. hopefully u guys can capture it just right.. not too dragged... not to overdo things.... report to us any progress u have.. and good luck !

[Mr.Anderson]

first day of filming was today, went ok, fairly smooth. A few audio problems, but i think theyre fixable. We're gonna film the big robber shoot out tommorow.