New My Dog Kipper Script (Edited for weather conditions)
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New My Dog Kipper Script (Edited for weather conditions)
I have edited my script to allow for current weather conditions. I need some advice on how to make this work.
I need some way to write snow in to the rest of the script.
(Nick runs out the door and down the street. He stops at the house two houses down, and knocks on the door. Burglar comes out)
Nick: (Eerily calm) Did you rob my house last night?
Burglar: Yea, I did.
Nick: Did you know that you killed my dog Kipper?
Burglar: Ummmmm… Oh yes! Sorry.
Nick: I’m here to get revenge on you.
Burglar: Ok. Try.
(Nick throws a few punches, but Burglar blocks all of them and kicks Nick off the porch.)
Nick: I will get revenge on you! Just you wait!
Burglar: Ok! I’ll be here! Eating my Pop-Tarts!
(Nick runs off)
(Night, Inside. Nick is at is computer. He is on Google Search.)
Nick: Let’s see. Vengeance… nothing. Revenge… no… Here we go! “How to get revenge on the guy who robbed your house and then killed your dog and beat you up in three free lessons! Ooo! I get a free cheeseburger when I sign up!
(Day, Japanese Garden. Nick is training to Rocky-type music. Then he throws something like a DBZ fireball and starts doing Karate. CUT TO: Burglar, sitting on the couch at home, watching T.V Eating Potato Chips and drinking a Coke. CUT TO: Nick, still training. Then, when he thinks he’s ready, he turns off the music, and runs down the street.)
(CUT TO: Nick, Running up the street to Burglars house. He knocks on the door again. The fight scene from before repeats itself, except this time, Nick gets up and fight back. The fight, moving back down the road, CUT TO: Nick and Burglar, Still fighting and moving down the road as passing motorists give them weird looks. Repeat from the last CUT TO: a few times, then CUT TO: Nick and Burglar, finally fighting down the road and into Nicks yard. CUT TO: long fistfight scene, then, Nick and Burglar pull out guns at the same moment. Burglars is sizably larger than Nicks. They stand in a face off. The Theme from “The Good, The Bad, and the Uglyâ€
I need some way to write snow in to the rest of the script.
(Nick runs out the door and down the street. He stops at the house two houses down, and knocks on the door. Burglar comes out)
Nick: (Eerily calm) Did you rob my house last night?
Burglar: Yea, I did.
Nick: Did you know that you killed my dog Kipper?
Burglar: Ummmmm… Oh yes! Sorry.
Nick: I’m here to get revenge on you.
Burglar: Ok. Try.
(Nick throws a few punches, but Burglar blocks all of them and kicks Nick off the porch.)
Nick: I will get revenge on you! Just you wait!
Burglar: Ok! I’ll be here! Eating my Pop-Tarts!
(Nick runs off)
(Night, Inside. Nick is at is computer. He is on Google Search.)
Nick: Let’s see. Vengeance… nothing. Revenge… no… Here we go! “How to get revenge on the guy who robbed your house and then killed your dog and beat you up in three free lessons! Ooo! I get a free cheeseburger when I sign up!
(Day, Japanese Garden. Nick is training to Rocky-type music. Then he throws something like a DBZ fireball and starts doing Karate. CUT TO: Burglar, sitting on the couch at home, watching T.V Eating Potato Chips and drinking a Coke. CUT TO: Nick, still training. Then, when he thinks he’s ready, he turns off the music, and runs down the street.)
(CUT TO: Nick, Running up the street to Burglars house. He knocks on the door again. The fight scene from before repeats itself, except this time, Nick gets up and fight back. The fight, moving back down the road, CUT TO: Nick and Burglar, Still fighting and moving down the road as passing motorists give them weird looks. Repeat from the last CUT TO: a few times, then CUT TO: Nick and Burglar, finally fighting down the road and into Nicks yard. CUT TO: long fistfight scene, then, Nick and Burglar pull out guns at the same moment. Burglars is sizably larger than Nicks. They stand in a face off. The Theme from “The Good, The Bad, and the Uglyâ€
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Well you could do the openning fight in the house, and for the part that is fillmed that seems to involve lots of fireballs, is it possable to re film, or you could have a line dubbed in, "I'm so hot with revenge that I melted the snow" or "Look at this contenutiy screw up" or "Weren't we just in snow?" "That won't save you!"
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Re: New My Dog Kipper Script (Edited for weather conditions)
I am not sure where you got this from, but it seems somewhat irrelevant to the story. foxwood, you just may be the star of the show!2nd_Recon wrote:CUT TO: Foxwood having orgasm (JK)
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