from noncompressed version
Well, this was my summer project and I think it turned out ok, originated from a 7 page script but most of it was tossed out, rewritten and rethought along the way. The synopsis is basically, a guy trying to commit suicide by overdosing on drugs- no specific type and follows his hallucinogenic adventures through his head. Shot it with a Tell me what you guys think, and comment, need to improve. separated into 4 parts due to youtube compression- should be widescreen.
warning - strong language
http://youtube.com/watch?v=8pa97DmzEeA part 1
http://youtube.com/watch?v=4QwGqMOxjNI part 2
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2yNdSA... part 3
http://youtube.com/watch?v=hOK-U89R98s part 4 (more) (less)
FINALLY FINISHED :D!
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RE: FINALLY FINISHED :D!
Interesting...some of it was a bit rough, the running scene was too long I thought and some of the acting wasn't too great. I thought it was quite good it just needed that extra polising. P.S. It's a youtube film(s) so you could put it directly into your post by using [youtube] [/youtube] tags. Good effort 3.5 to 4/5
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RE: FINALLY FINISHED :D!
Isn't the youtube tag down? I've tried before, around when the MH server was done, and the option disappeared...
Good stuff, by the way.
Good stuff, by the way.
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RE: FINALLY FINISHED :D!
thank ya, finally constructive comments, yeah the acting , im working on trying to tap the drama program at my uni through my friend, most my friends wont volunteer their time to be in my movies, thats why i played death haha.
RE: FINALLY FINISHED :D!
Isn't the youtube tag down? I've tried before, around when the MH server was done, and the option disappeared...
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