Visions of Sin
A boy is given the power to see the sin people have committed and will commit in the future by touching them. However, instead of saving people of their sins he chooses to kill himself to save himself the grief of seeing all the bad in the world.
this is a plot outline for a movie i have to do at school about a social issue
does anyone think its got pottential or has it been done?
any comments would be greatly appreciated
thanks
visions of sin
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RE: visions of sin
It sounds a bit like Unbreakable. It definitely has potential, but perhaps he could see the sins in a different manner than touching them? Maybe just with eye contact. Imagine not being able to look in to people's eyes without seeing their sins? That would drive him to suicide.
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its supposed be a short film round about 4-6 mins
im thinking now more like he tells a close friend how awful it is to see everyones sins
but his friend tells him that its the greatest thing becuase he can save people from themselves and he can be a hero. but the hero cant stand it and tries to kill himself and when his friend realises this he tries to save him. but as he saves him the powers are somehow transfered between eachother and his friend gets the power. then he realises how bad it is. then we can see the heros sins
so whadya rekon
im thinking now more like he tells a close friend how awful it is to see everyones sins
but his friend tells him that its the greatest thing becuase he can save people from themselves and he can be a hero. but the hero cant stand it and tries to kill himself and when his friend realises this he tries to save him. but as he saves him the powers are somehow transfered between eachother and his friend gets the power. then he realises how bad it is. then we can see the heros sins
so whadya rekon