Compare our Movies *NEW MOVIE(S)*

[Truggy]

Ok, in my last semester class "multimedia productions" we had to make a movie for the class. Now im not the smartest with this stuff, but HOLY HELL.....these guys i were workin with were TERRIBLE. they got us an "F" missed a d by 2%....here is their final edit of the movie, which is pretty bad (the day i missed, they edited)....

http://matt.echowave.net/uploads/Truggy ... dollar.wmv

I saved my personal grade by taking it home and re-editing it by what i had to work with, which wasnt much because these guys had no Plot, No story, NOTHING ABSOLUTELY NOTHING....

Here is my re-edited version, its not the best of things. I want u to actually tell me whats wrong with the origional, i mean i tried to re-edit it as best as i could, but man it went from some guy getting thrown out of class to a crazy guy from some insane asylum getting chased and taken out of the parking lot, no music in the origional, so enjoy my re-edit.

http://12.22.230.41/MicroTech/Hosted/Fi ... -Edit).zip

Thanks

~Truggy

[UFProductions]

With no offence intended Truggy, I don't really feel like dowloading a film I know is going to be awful. Post up a short clip (the best of each) for us to compare, without having to tie up lots of time watching something that no-one expects to be good.

[Matt]

Ok I've watched the first one. Downloading the second.

The first one was bad. So I am interested to see how you could improve on it

I think what makes it worse is the choppy music. There are no transitions in the music just blunt cuts.

The actual idea was ok but I got completely lost with the whole asylum thing???

UPDATE:

Seen the second one. That was definitely better. The music was a million times better. Also you corrected the bit where the bloke in the blue and white patchy shirt is seen standing through the glass before he walks through the door. Still completely lost by the asylum bit

[I3lade203]

Downloading the first.

Yeah was kind of .. well bad. I agree with matt, about the music and sound, and since I know you don't got the best camera in the world, I won't talk about quality. I didn't get the storyline though? Thats what really annoyed me, was I couldn't get what was going on. Music wouldn't have been as big of a problem if I could tell what was happening plotwise.

[Truggy]

Ok I've watched the first one. Downloading the second.

The first one was bad. So I am interested to see how you could improve on it

I think what makes it worse is the choppy music. There are no transitions in the music just blunt cuts.

The actual idea was ok but I got completely lost with the whole asylum thing???

i understand if you dont want to DL it, they are horrible, but they looped the same music twice in the first. Me Rheborn and Bear and "thewall" are actually working on 3 projects, "After-Math 3" , "The Stalker" and "Cursed Dollar"....were going to remake it good. There was Actually NO POINT to the asylum thing....i didnt even know it was in there until i watched it.....lol i know, but atleast my grade is higher than theirs

[Rheborn]

That is gonna be so friggin' sweet. The Cursed Dollar: Rejuvinated . Or something sketchy like that. Mwuahaha.

[ipon70]

Ummmmm, I just didn't get the movie

[Truggy]

any other comments? i know it sucks, but im just glad it saved my grade.

[Rheborn]

Ummmmm, I just didn't get the movie

Which is why we are remaking it.

[mercenary123]

I was gonna download it, but something is f*** up my PC and it downloads slow.

[KayBeck]

Wow. STORY STORY STORY. I can't emphisize that enough. You can forgive a lot when you've got a good story, which is non existent in this piece.

I think you did pretty good with what you had to work with though.

[Truggy]

thankyou...