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[asapfilms]

Hey film judges... I've got this film I made for my health class, its on Dream therapy...
Cant decide wether I should do more like it or ???

www.asapfilms.com/videos/dream1.wmv

tell me what you think

[Gyro]

I can't seem to view it, is the link correct?

[asapfilms]

yeah the link works, try copy and pasteing it into address bar... Do you have windows media player Turn off pop up blocker if you have one

[ipon70]

I thought you did a great job, seemed to follow like some of my dreams...very random.

The only parts I would change are

Opening is a little to long, pan was to long.
The field shot (yellowish scene) was to long.
And I would eliminate what I thought was CGI, when the guy falls.

Other then that, it rocked.

[UFProductions]

Well, ipon70 said everything that needs to be said about it. I think it was awsome, very well done, and tightly edited. The imagery in it was sweet, and the music fit it very well. Other than the thigs said above, and a bit of camera shake in a few parts, you've got a real winner here. What camera did you shoot it on?

[asapfilms]

Thanks for your comments, I agree completely with you ipon... Those are the 3/4 scenes I was worried about... The CGI blue screen thing I knew was bad but it was my first time using it... Im gonna work on the blue screen stuff more...

check out www.asapfilms.com to view more of my stuff and camera

As for the other problem Im getting a camera stabler for chirstmas

[2nd_Recon]

Very, very well made. I don't know if you care, but in the scene in teh begining, when the character is still laying in the bed, you can see the cameraman reflected in the bedpost. No real way arround it except for not shooting it, but it was the only other flaw I saw in it...

The first thing I thought in the begining was "if I didn't know this was supposed to be modeled after someones dream, I would be utterly confounded. It's got to much action for an art film (I saw an art film that was nothing but 5 minutes of traffic at an intersection, without sound) but was to random for a real film..."

[Epsilon]

I always say Go for it, no matter what. I mean, why not? What're you gonna lose? Time spent pondering whether you should have done it? lol Plus you always learn more from experience.