A Different Script: Cure My Tragedy

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A Different Script: Cure My Tragedy

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Tell me what you think, I just started it.

http://www.scriptbuddy.com/published/?p ... 535&t=&pg=
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Good so far. I like the idea of them being cops becuase then they have an accuse to kill people.
Are they gonna turn out to not be cops?
Anyways one thing I like about your titles are allways entertaining ..."Good so far"
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Well they turn out to be frauds
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what are frauds?
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fakes not real.
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oh yeah ...so they arne't cops
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It's excellent so far, great dialogue and good scene sequences. But ya gotta finish it.
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yeah i relize this thanks, how much did you read its up to about 8 pages now
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