I've been workin on a movie thats somewhat comedic, but also full of action and shooting. It's called Kill AIM. Here's the script and hopefully you guys can give me some feedback with ideas for any changes. I'm going for sort of a dark theme, like Max Payne or something along those lines. Enjoy. By the way, I mean no harm to AOL in anyway - its just fun.
KILL AIM
Characters
Eddie Montgomery – main character and unlucky teen who consistently has problems in his life caused by AIM instant messenger (computer gets virus, pop-ups nonstop, never able to connect, gets warned 100%, family is billed for no reason and they lose money, customer service people are jerks, father hit by an AOL truck, brother is killed because of a talk session that failed)
Peter Montgomery – smart, popular brother of Eddie who is killed early on because of an aim talk session that blows up his computer
Rob Krueger – loyal friend to Eddie who joins the “hit teamâ€
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Not Bad, I applaud you, now you need some good dialog and a descriptive script and you are in business.
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