Possible Good Short Film.

Gyro · Post by **Gyro** » Thu Jan 29, 2004 2:43 am

I finished a short story for an english assignment a few minutes ago and thought it might make a fairly descent short film. Thought I'd post the story and see what you guys think. (Mind you that I wrote it in about a half an hour plus it was for an extra credit assignment so its not my best work)

Pretend

Ã¢â‚¬Å“Artimis,Ã¢â‚¬

Themovieman44 · Post by **Themovieman44** » Thu Jan 29, 2004 1:43 pm

Not bad man. Do you have the caliber of actor to pull of the strong actingthat the story portrays?

Gyro · Post by **Gyro** » Thu Jan 29, 2004 11:15 pm

Yeah, I think so...

Famous · Post by **Famous** » Fri Feb 06, 2004 5:11 am

Artimis ...nice name

Gyro · Post by **Gyro** » Sun Feb 29, 2004 9:04 pm

That avator creeps me out famous

Grant · Post by **Grant** » Sun Feb 29, 2004 11:01 pm

so would it blend from a fanstasy look back into a modern appearance once it was established? Or am i confused

Gyro · Post by **Gyro** » Sun Feb 29, 2004 11:03 pm

yeah yeah, thats it... kinda weird, but thats what i did in like second grade so itd be kinda cool

Grant · Post by **Grant** » Sun Feb 29, 2004 11:24 pm

i like the concept, simple and pure idea...shoot it

Gyro · Post by **Gyro** » Sun Feb 29, 2004 11:43 pm

thinking about it... but right now i've got three other films to worry about, I was just wondering what you guys thought of it

inframeproductions · Post by **inframeproductions** » Mon Mar 01, 2004 12:04 am

Nice rip off gyro. So unoriginal, its though u copied straight from the gladiator, of course they are romans just as u write as artimis is. Oh yeah its like u just took the name of MAXIMUS and changed it to a similar sounding name ARTIMIS.

Gyro · Post by **Gyro** » Mon Mar 01, 2004 12:19 am

So, I'm a big fan of putting people down too, anyways... do you know anything about roman culture, mainly names? How many roman names do you know that dont end with "s" I'm not trying to be rude, but some people.

Grant · Post by **Grant** » Mon Mar 01, 2004 8:51 am

Well i think it is really cool. Also Gladiator was not at all original itself

Famous · Post by **Famous** » Tue Mar 02, 2004 9:58 pm

Yeah great ideas!

Gyro · Post by **Gyro** » Thu Mar 04, 2004 2:36 am

thanks guys, so you think itd be a descent film?

Famous · Post by **Famous** » Fri Mar 05, 2004 4:57 am

Yeah ...I do
Let us know how it turned out?