PAUSE - A short film
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PAUSE - A short film
Hey. This is a short film that I entered in for a school contest. Criticism is welcome!
Enjoy.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MZZyHY_kofw
Worley
Enjoy.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MZZyHY_kofw
Worley
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RE: PAUSE - A short film
I gave it a watch and I dig the pause effects. Care to elaborate on how you did the one where the character is in the foreground and the other is moving in the background? I liked how he moved the trampoline underneath the sister, that was pretty good. The music was great, it matched perfectly.
My only concern was really the acting...it just didn't seem like they were in an argument to me with lines like, "Whoa dude why did you do that?"
After I watched this I had a glass of water, I don't know why but that moment made me want some.
My only concern was really the acting...it just didn't seem like they were in an argument to me with lines like, "Whoa dude why did you do that?"
After I watched this I had a glass of water, I don't know why but that moment made me want some.
RE: PAUSE - A short film
Looks like some image overlaying with the frame masked to reveal the background. Nice short. Different to the norm. Keep up the interesting work mate
RE: PAUSE - A short film
Thanks a lot guys! Yeah, like pdj said... I basically masked out the characters I wanted paused inside of Photoshop, and added that layer on top of the background layer, so the background characters could move about. Thanks for the comment Kentertainment about the music... my friend will be happy to hear you liked it. Yeah, the acting was pretty bad because I did this as a final school project and I had six weeks to do it... but, I procrastinated to the last 2 days! (oops haha) So this was completed in less than 48 hours, and when we were filming my friends kept messing up on their lines, but we didn't have enough time to re-shoot. Procrastination is bad, everyone. Don't do it!
And the thing about it making you want water is pretty strange..
Thanks again for taking the time to watch and comment guys! I appreciate it a lot!
And the thing about it making you want water is pretty strange..
Thanks again for taking the time to watch and comment guys! I appreciate it a lot!
RE: PAUSE - A short film
the arguement was ridiculus and very trival, you could have made it more realistic, maybe a fight over a girl or something
the acting poor but saved by the effects, very cool
how did you do? did you get a descent grade?
the acting poor but saved by the effects, very cool
how did you do? did you get a descent grade?
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reminded me of a film that was on: "On The Lot", very similar re-watching it: http://www.thelot.com/episodes/?ep=2&vd=21 good job though