Charlie and the Calculator Factory (Working Title)

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Charlie and the Calculator Factory (Working Title)

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Just completed a new script for a Film Competition at my school, link is below

written about 6 hours after returning from Paris (to Hobart in Australia) which meant more than 48 hours traveling, so telling me about spelling mistakes and complete plot holes that you notice would be greatly appreciated if noticed.

it's a sort-of non-climax based film that relies on dialogue, hopefully I can pull it off,
but not sure if it's any good (no point wasting my time if it's cr**)...

enjoy (hopefully)

http://web.mac.com/angus.ware/iWeb/Site ... ulator.htm
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anyone?
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I read part of it. It was a little confusing, but I liked the characters.
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i didnt know you lived in tasmania, (do you?)
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yes!
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