The bit you see in the old slummish looking area was filmed very recently (like 2 weeks ago) and I like it. The flashback bits were filmed months ago and their acting has improved a lot since then... but is still not bad I think.
Will be posting next part of the story some time next week if filming this weekend goes according to plan.
Question: The most important thing is, what did you understand fom this scene about the characters and what is going on in the story? That's what I would like to know most.
It isn't ready yet anyway and probably won't be for another month so in the meantime it'll be good for me to be criticised on the work I've done so far, so I can improve on these final scenes I'm going to be filming. I thought that was the purpose of the site. It's not like I'm posting things of a few seconds. This scene is 6 minutes.
Then don't post in bits. Post it all at once. And if it is too long to fit on or upload then simply do it in parts but post it up when it's all done. Also your title doesn't tell me what this film is called or is about.
