Mastercard Commercial - New Video

SE7 · Post by **SE7** » Sat Dec 30, 2006 6:21 am

Hey guys, me and a few of my friends made a short 60 sec. video.

It's a funny mimic of those darn Mastercard Commercials... hehe.. well, if you wanna check it out (please.. lol)

click here:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KVP6X4UWpCM

And if you think it's funny, please post a comment... thanks

Colin

Zacatac927 · Post by **Zacatac927** » Sat Dec 30, 2006 4:25 pm

nice, it was a little long, awkward pauses, id cut it down to 30 secs...

but it was funny, well acted, great cinematography

DEDFX · Post by **DEDFX** » Sat Dec 30, 2006 8:01 pm

A little too long, the end could have been better though.

SE7 · Post by **SE7** » Sat Dec 30, 2006 8:10 pm

Ok guys, I was trying to make a 60 second, not a 30 second, so I'm sorry if it was boring to you....

And DEDFX- I'm sorry you thought the ending was bad.

Oh, by the way, I completed everything from planning to uploading on to youtube in a little under 2 hours...

Thanks for your constructive criticism, I'll take it into consideration next time...

SE7

F.F.F. · Post by **F.F.F.** » Sat Dec 30, 2006 8:12 pm

Great, but a little too long and I think a different angle in the car would have been better.

DEDFX · Post by **DEDFX** » Sat Dec 30, 2006 10:17 pm

I didn't say it was bad I said it could have been better.

SE7 · Post by **SE7** » Sun Dec 31, 2006 12:26 am

Thanks F.F.F. - I appreciate your comment. The car I was in, a tiny Toyota Corolla, was way too small to get any other shots really, and I dont have a wide angle lens... so this was the best I could do...

DEDFX- I was just messin around... I know, the ending probably could have been a little bit more creative, but whatever.. hehe

Thanks everyone,

SE7

SE7 · Post by **SE7** » Mon Jan 01, 2007 10:40 pm

Hey!! Too many people were telling me to make is shorter....

So here is an update. Its 40 seconds instead of 60 seconds...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oT7XPILTz9Y

Thanks,

Colin

youngfilmmaker · Post by **youngfilmmaker** » Tue Jan 02, 2007 12:27 am

Better. Good Job =]

Clarence · Post by **Clarence** » Tue Jan 02, 2007 6:08 am

That one was much better.

You should add "There are some things money can't buy..." in there before he says "For everything else, there's MasterCard."

MasterMike · Post by **MasterMike** » Tue Jan 02, 2007 5:05 pm

A little predictable, but nicely put together. Good work.

SE7 · Post by **SE7** » Tue Jan 02, 2007 7:12 pm

Thanks guys.. I appreciate it.

Yeah, good idea Clarence. I might add that.... thanks for the idea!

MasterMike- It was kinda supposed to be dumb, so if it was predictable but still funny.... GOOD! And thanks for the comment..

lol .. thanks everyone!

SE7

rep22 · Post by **rep22** » Tue Jan 02, 2007 7:23 pm

I liked it. Thought it was very good.

Some shots/angles were great. I also liked the frame freeze for the "gas money" title.

It may have been predictable, but that's only because there's only so much you do while on a road trip

I liked it. Good job!

Jperson · Post by **Jperson** » Thu Jan 04, 2007 4:39 pm

Liked it. good, good angles. There were some akward pause, but oh well. And also by gas I s'pose you mean PETROL? P-E-T-R-O-L. Lol

rhys · Post by **rhys** » Tue Jan 09, 2007 6:31 am

I was expecting a "alcohol for a *smashing* drive - $239.54" *carcrash* then a "'sorry mum' rose - $5". But hey it was still good. Its not that bad. It did lag a little bit, but it was fine.

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