New Shitty School Project (Guns/Blood)

maj_barnes · Post by **maj_barnes** » Fri Nov 24, 2006 10:03 pm

Got a new project for school, make a music video. I made one, I wish I tried harder on it: it came out pretty bad. Oh well... As my friend (co producer, and lead actor) put it: "u should hire a writer so ur story isnt retarded." His wasn't all that great either.

Anyways, best way to describe this:

A FUN SNUFF FILM!

Lots of killing, and alot of glitches I didn't feel like fixing (like dropped frames where you can't see muzzle flashes from blank guns).

Enjoy.

Jperson · Post by **Jperson** » Fri Nov 24, 2006 11:42 pm

lol...quite good. Apart from those cuts. And music glitches. Some good muzzle flashes.

rhys · Post by **rhys** » Sat Nov 25, 2006 5:35 am

Lol, thats funny as hell. I love it.

DAZMAN · Post by **DAZMAN** » Sat Nov 25, 2006 4:55 pm

one of the best films i have seen on here.

Lawriejaffa · Post by **Lawriejaffa** » Sat Nov 25, 2006 6:15 pm

lol well i wouldnt go that far Dazman, however it does look and feel quite cool, however lets see what it looks like with the cuts fixed, cos those sound cuts are rough!

DEDFX · Post by **DEDFX** » Sat Nov 25, 2006 6:18 pm

you just need to fix the acting

DAZMAN · Post by **DAZMAN** » Sat Nov 25, 2006 7:29 pm

Forgetting sound and acting, look at the cinematography. ItÃ¢â‚¬â„¢s good

maj_barnes · Post by **maj_barnes** » Mon Nov 27, 2006 10:12 pm

Thanks guys. The acting was my favorite part: just look how scared Ryan is at the fact that they're next.

I was thinking about going back and redoing and fixing this: but I just moved on.

Firestorm · Post by **Firestorm** » Mon Nov 27, 2006 11:08 pm

My favorite part was the gun effects. The kind of silenced gun was quite nice. But yeah actually a pretty good film bar a few parts with what looked like intentionally bad acting and the story...

That one shot with the guy going into the house and shooting the people in there, the first cut was very nice.

UFProductions · Post by **UFProductions** » Tue Nov 28, 2006 3:55 am

Recut it to correct the few minor error please, because that was bad-a**.

joe · Post by **joe** » Tue Nov 28, 2006 6:13 pm

JW, where did you get the smoke puffs as the gun fired outside of the bathroom stall?

maj_barnes · Post by **maj_barnes** » Tue Nov 28, 2006 10:17 pm

The acting was all real.

If I have some time I might redo it, but I doubt it: as sad as it may be.

And the smoke was from Detfilms.

joe · Post by **joe** » Wed Nov 29, 2006 5:45 pm

Did you have to buy the smoke or was it free. If it was free, do you have a link cuz I couldn't find it. Thanks.

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