SECOND TEASER TRAILER UPLOaDED! PLEASE WATCH NOW!

Lawriejaffa · Post by **Lawriejaffa** » Mon Jul 24, 2006 11:18 pm

This is terrible gents, a whole load of BS spamming has taken up this thread. If you scumbags are gonna msg each other pm it instead of spamming the msg board...

elstongunn · Post by **elstongunn** » Tue Jul 25, 2006 11:45 am

bit late feedback but anyway music was good titles were good but could have been a bit tighter make it flow a bit better. have the words on the same clip as the explosions etc. other than that not good. actin bad couldnt here the diologue or follow what was happeining on screen. i in terms of talking to a dv camera cut to a closeup of the person talking. watch feature films you will rarely see a conversation between two people with just the one static over the shoulder/ side on shot. they are always cutting with dialogue and reaction. so do that yourself its not hard to match action.

GeokesPerson · Post by **GeokesPerson** » Thu Jul 27, 2006 2:49 pm

Here are some more images of tranZgresion art made by me while Jperson was here:
Please comment.

http://www.freewebs.com/geokes/tranZgre ... esion2.jpg

http://www.freewebs.com/geokes/tranZgre ... esion3.jpg

http://www.freewebs.com/geokes/tranZgre ... esion4.jpg

http://www.freewebs.com/geokes/tranZgre ... esion6.jpg

http://www.freewebs.com/geokes/tranZgre ... sion10.jpg

http://www.freewebs.com/geokes/tranZgre ... sion11.jpg

GeokesPerson · Post by **GeokesPerson** » Thu Jul 27, 2006 2:52 pm

Lebotimizer_1 wrote:i will be waiting for that with anticipation SARCASM AT MAXIMUM

It's a TRAILER and besides I haven't seen anything of yours great, yet, either...

Jperson · Post by **Jperson** » Fri Jul 28, 2006 6:40 pm

OK, i'll upload a second trailer soonishÃ¢â‚¬Â¦

GeokesPerson · Post by **GeokesPerson** » Fri Jul 28, 2006 6:51 pm

Jperson · Post by **Jperson** » Fri Jul 28, 2006 7:12 pm

Not too soonish (and I knwo this will upset some people, like mickar and LawrieÃ¢â‚¬Â¦ mindless chatter, spamming etc. Ã¢â‚¬Â¦)

GeokesPerson · Post by **GeokesPerson** » Sat Jul 29, 2006 4:52 pm

Jperson wrote:Not too soonish (and I knwo this will upset some people, like mickar and LawrieÃ¢â‚¬Â¦ mindless chatter, spamming etc. Ã¢â‚¬Â¦)

Why?

GeokesPerson · Post by **GeokesPerson** » Sat Jul 29, 2006 4:56 pm

Lawriejaffa wrote:This is terrible gents, a whole load of BS spamming has taken up this thread. If you scumbags are gonna msg each other pm it instead of spamming the msg board...

Excuuse ME TranZgresion will boggle your tiny brain's miniture prossesing power!

DEDFX · Post by **DEDFX** » Sat Jul 29, 2006 7:01 pm

"Excuuse ME TranZgresion will boggle your tiny brain's miniture prossesing power!"

You really have to act mature, I hope a mod deletes you from this site...

GeokesPerson · Post by **GeokesPerson** » Sat Jul 29, 2006 7:44 pm

Sorry it was a joke, I was just pointing out that it will be better than the things we already have submitted.

challengerbravo525 · Post by **challengerbravo525** » Wed Jan 31, 2007 7:55 pm

you never did answer my question

Jperson · Post by **Jperson** » Thu Feb 01, 2007 6:19 pm

What question?

challengerbravo525 · Post by **challengerbravo525** » Thu Feb 01, 2007 6:57 pm

you know what...i cant remember..so im jsut going to say jest mi troche nudze

Darzeth · Post by **Darzeth** » Fri Feb 02, 2007 7:28 pm

that was pretty good, there are some problems but good none theless. Hope your finish product will be good too. Some of the effects were good and i was curious how you did them.

Jperson · Post by **Jperson** » Sat Feb 03, 2007 9:38 am

Wow, thanks Darzeth. I got the explosions from www.detonationfilms.com (not me...

). The music is made by us...

angusware · Post by **angusware** » Sat Feb 03, 2007 12:29 pm

Ok, so this is on top again then? anyway, saw the trailer.
This may come as a harsh comment, but I cannot beleive for one second you criticise other peoples work. The editing was not great, and the explosions with titles
were lame, the Garageband music didn't help. The time warping walk thing didn't do it for me, because it shows everyone you don't have enough time or stuff to make a trailer with lots of footage. The explosions didn't fit, and the sounds for them needed some kind of work to stop them from suddenly cutting out. The camera work was shaky and /or uninteresting.

I also have to say that I hate titles where the sentence is stretched out word by word with images or video in between each word, people do it all the time and it is annoying and makes you lose the audience.

mickcar73 · Post by **mickcar73** » Sat Feb 03, 2007 3:25 pm

ye actually mist of that was detination film's stuff rraaaaa

camiziodeltoro · Post by **camiziodeltoro** » Tue Feb 06, 2007 2:12 pm

yaaaaahwn! go do something else

Jperson · Post by **Jperson** » Mon Feb 12, 2007 9:24 am

OK....right this is why I find some people on this forum or just the forum in general quite hypocritical. First of all I accept everyone's comments, this was s***, which is why I decided not to finish it. And the trailer made look more s*** than it actually was. OK, OK, I admit all that, but then when I say something a lot less harsh than camiziodeltoro just did (s/he effectively told me to give up film making) I get completly shouted down.

OK, angusware again I admit this is not good and it is very old now....but that doesn't stop me from being able to critiscise other people's work. I can still tell what it good and what is bad.

Sorry if that was a bit over the top.