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bit late feedback but anyway music was good titles were good but could have been a bit tighter make it flow a bit better. have the words on the same clip as the explosions etc. other than that not good. actin bad couldnt here the diologue or follow what was happeining on screen. i in terms of talking to a dv camera cut to a closeup of the person talking. watch feature films you will rarely see a conversation between two people with just the one static over the shoulder/ side on shot. they are always cutting with dialogue and reaction. so do that yourself its not hard to match action.
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Here are some more images of tranZgresion art made by me while Jperson was here:
Please comment.
http://www.freewebs.com/geokes/tranZgre ... esion2.jpg
http://www.freewebs.com/geokes/tranZgre ... esion3.jpg
http://www.freewebs.com/geokes/tranZgre ... esion4.jpg
http://www.freewebs.com/geokes/tranZgre ... esion6.jpg
http://www.freewebs.com/geokes/tranZgre ... sion10.jpg
http://www.freewebs.com/geokes/tranZgre ... sion11.jpg
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http://www.freewebs.com/geokes/tranZgre ... esion2.jpg
http://www.freewebs.com/geokes/tranZgre ... esion3.jpg
http://www.freewebs.com/geokes/tranZgre ... esion4.jpg
http://www.freewebs.com/geokes/tranZgre ... esion6.jpg
http://www.freewebs.com/geokes/tranZgre ... sion10.jpg
http://www.freewebs.com/geokes/tranZgre ... sion11.jpg
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tranZgresion: in post-production
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tranZgresion: in post-production
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Excuuse ME TranZgresion will boggle your tiny brain's miniture prossesing power!Lawriejaffa wrote:This is terrible gents, a whole load of BS spamming has taken up this thread. If you scumbags are gonna msg each other pm it instead of spamming the msg board...
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tranZgresion: in post-production
spent brass: in pre-production
mercinary short: in post-production
tranZgresion: in post-production
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that was pretty good, there are some problems but good none theless. Hope your finish product will be good too. Some of the effects were good and i was curious how you did them.
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Wow, thanks Darzeth. I got the explosions from www.detonationfilms.com (not me...). The music is made by us...
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Ok, so this is on top again then? anyway, saw the trailer.
This may come as a harsh comment, but I cannot beleive for one second you criticise other peoples work. The editing was not great, and the explosions with titles
were lame, the Garageband music didn't help. The time warping walk thing didn't do it for me, because it shows everyone you don't have enough time or stuff to make a trailer with lots of footage. The explosions didn't fit, and the sounds for them needed some kind of work to stop them from suddenly cutting out. The camera work was shaky and /or uninteresting.
I also have to say that I hate titles where the sentence is stretched out word by word with images or video in between each word, people do it all the time and it is annoying and makes you lose the audience.
This may come as a harsh comment, but I cannot beleive for one second you criticise other peoples work. The editing was not great, and the explosions with titles
were lame, the Garageband music didn't help. The time warping walk thing didn't do it for me, because it shows everyone you don't have enough time or stuff to make a trailer with lots of footage. The explosions didn't fit, and the sounds for them needed some kind of work to stop them from suddenly cutting out. The camera work was shaky and /or uninteresting.
I also have to say that I hate titles where the sentence is stretched out word by word with images or video in between each word, people do it all the time and it is annoying and makes you lose the audience.
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OK....right this is why I find some people on this forum or just the forum in general quite hypocritical. First of all I accept everyone's comments, this was s***, which is why I decided not to finish it. And the trailer made look more s*** than it actually was. OK, OK, I admit all that, but then when I say something a lot less harsh than camiziodeltoro just did (s/he effectively told me to give up film making) I get completly shouted down.
OK, angusware again I admit this is not good and it is very old now....but that doesn't stop me from being able to critiscise other people's work. I can still tell what it good and what is bad.
Sorry if that was a bit over the top.
OK, angusware again I admit this is not good and it is very old now....but that doesn't stop me from being able to critiscise other people's work. I can still tell what it good and what is bad.
Sorry if that was a bit over the top.
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