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awful? white goods, well, one that's washing machines and stuff cause the cleaner gets killed, but you don't have to know that. I could have filmed a cocktail, if I'd wanted to. The grain, well first of all I had to make it low quality to upload, and secondly you're really meant to see too much, it creates more tension, and thirdly you're blind!!elstongunn wrote:awful, just awful. what the hell does white goods have to do with the heart. tediously long. could not make out a damn thing in the black and white grain. a overtly long generic exercise. didnt try to be "arty" as you say or original because its been done a million times before if you want to do somthing remotely interisting with any hope of holding audiences attention have a look at "alone" posted by another member on this forum. standard use of apple imovie soundeffects. but they did work for you to a degree. nice titling though.
The gun sound effet at the end? Yeah, 'cause I was experimenting makng it echo and it didn't turn out very well in that version.DarkElastic wrote: The tension gained through music and shots was very good, but it was spoilt by a really bad sound effect and no diversity in shots.
Jperson wrote:here's a new short, which I originaly recorded as an arty thing, but then decided, well that doesn't really appeal to everyone, so I chaged it a bit and added a bit of drama. I won't say much more now. PLEASE WATCH AND COMMENT NOW!
http://video.google.com/videoplay?docid ... 5&hl=en-GB
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santi wrote:jperson - you've just wasted 4 minutes of my life.... boring, boring and once again: boring. Some house hardware shooted the way that makes me sea sick with some mumbo-jumbo titles.
Will do, at least you gave some sensible comments though…DarkElastic wrote:I'm sorry to say it mate, but if all posts are negative towards your movie - mainly understanding what is happening - then I think you have to accept that you need to go back to the drawing board on this film, treat it as a failure, learn from the mistakes, and attempt to create a better film next time.