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Jperson wrote:mickar, i don't give a damn what you think, .

HAHHAHAH okay whatever dont accept my delicious comment, youll be begging me to someday
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Yes that bit about the door was strange. When we were mackeing it we should have Got rid of some of the replay thingys then we could have got a higher quality.
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what a trailer, i fell asleep!
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Yeah, how old are you? Get some of your friends to be in the movie, a movie with 9 year olds would be good if it had to do with 9 year old buisness such as Spongebob or Legos. I couldn't hear what they were saying but the hype in the beginning with small explosions to a kid with a gun that has orange on the end was pretty bad. No idea what the editing to make it look "strange" was but it isn't working. Make your titles bigger, and use people that look like teenagers at least.
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Listen dudes, I'm afraid, unlike some people, I don't particularly care too much about the really fine points, apart from in some special films, but thanks for the comment anyway, keep them coming.
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challengerbravo525 wrote:no, so why make it?
why make it, hadn't I explained, beccause I was bored and it wasted time, and then recently I had nothing else to do, so I found it on my computer and put on the internet.
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DEDFX wrote:Yeah, how old are you?
I'm afraid but that just sounds perverse.
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You want comments, but you don't care what anybody else says..

Make up your damn mind, kid :P

Also, the "fine points" like editing, acting, believability, are what making movies pretty much entirely consist of, so these are the things you should be working on.
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Of cousre I working on them and of course I care about what people say, I wouldn't ask for comments if I didn't want to be critised, 'cause every film on here has at least on justified critisim. And the fine points, well your ffine points are different to mine: for instance, what I really hate is when someone says something like, oh that calibre gun wasn't invented until a year later, or whatever. Editing is a major part, so is acting.
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nobody was calling your film historically inacurate, he said that there was a huge orange bit on the gun which makes it obvious its a toy
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first of all mickar did I ever accuse SgtPadrino of accusing me of being historicaly inaccurate, no. I just said that was what I called 'fine details' and what that I hated it when people critised you over that. And besides, of course it's a toy gun, do you really expect a eleven or twelve year-ol to go carting around a real semi-automatic pistol??
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no i was talkin bout DEDFX saying theres a red tip on it, you could paint it black r watever intead of it being obvious
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oh right mickar, actualy that's a good idea, for my next films that involve guns I'll do that.
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OK, anyone else? I need more comments, thought etc.
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Is this a joke? wheres the real film
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i agree with lebotomizer, it is ok, but where is it?
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As i said before, it is in post-production, but it has has to been delayed further 'cause I lost it all, really randomly and have to start post-production all over again.
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i will be waiting for that with anticipation SARCASM AT MAXIMUM
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hello jperson I Know wear you live literally jacob s. j. :wink:
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Jperson wrote:Listen dudes, I'm afraid, unlike some people, I don't particularly care too much about the really fine points, apart from in some special films, but thanks for the comment anyway, keep them coming.
oreally jacob you used to go to school in dulwich
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this movie better wow me to the ends of the earth!
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operson, who are you, you aren't Oscar are you???
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challengerbravo525 wrote:this movie better wow me to the ends of the earth!
Yeah, like anything I do would do that!
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Lebotimizer_1 wrote:i will be waiting for that with anticipation SARCASM AT MAXIMUM
Well if you don't like it then p*** off, I don't care, but do you really have to make that comment?
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