S.T.O.R.M (super team of renegade mercenaries) trailer
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S.T.O.R.M (super team of renegade mercenaries) trailer
first thing I've ever posted on here, its a trailer for a film i'm working on, put together by my film editor
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=46btrfWvLCI
its a spoof action film I posted the script on here a few weeks ago
comments please
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=46btrfWvLCI
its a spoof action film I posted the script on here a few weeks ago
comments please
RE: S.T.O.R.M (super team of renegade mercenaries) trailer
Looks cool, pretty funny.
Can't wait to see the whole film.
Did Holywell have any idea you were filming at the school?
Can't wait to see the whole film.
Did Holywell have any idea you were filming at the school?
RE: S.T.O.R.M (super team of renegade mercenaries) trailer
from what i saw i hvae noticed that you have no idea about tactical movements and operations,
is this the comic side because if it is then good job....i would have put a fake plate on the car or blur it just in case
is this the comic side because if it is then good job....i would have put a fake plate on the car or blur it just in case
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RE: S.T.O.R.M (super team of renegade mercenaries) trailer
Haha, Im praying that that was supposed to be funny ; )
Looked good if it was : )
Looked good if it was : )
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Nah, I don't mind but that's my old account. Add x__atouchoverrated@hotmail.co.uk instead (2 underscores).
Tell your ''editor'' not use Windows movie maker 2, especially when cutting trailers.
As for the initial trailer, it wasn't pieced together well, nor did it build an tension or excitement.
There wasn't any change at all, which i thought would of helped. We also didn't learn anything from the trailer, than it's group of people randomly running around.
As for the initial trailer, it wasn't pieced together well, nor did it build an tension or excitement.
There wasn't any change at all, which i thought would of helped. We also didn't learn anything from the trailer, than it's group of people randomly running around.
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I found it made me smile more than I am prepared to admit, the para landing needs much more work but I asume that will be one of the scenes you will be filming? as far as it went for a trailer, you needto have more of the story in there, as it was I must agree with 'freed':
would like to see you develope the trailer more, nice choice of music though.There wasn't any change at all, which i thought would of helped. We also didn't learn anything from the trailer, than it's group of people randomly running around.
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