Here a little shortfilm we made today...
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15:10
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wildabeast009
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RE: 15:10
I'm not quite sure I get. From what I could tell, there wasn't much of a plot, not to mention a clear beginning, middle, and end. The direction looks fine, the acting was not that bad either, but the plot is very vague. Please explain.
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RE: 15:10
I think it also could be when a person dreams of getting up, dreams of doing a number of activities - even go to the toilet, which can end badly while your asleep - and then wake to find that that was a dream.
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wildabeast009
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RE: 15:10
There's no hook to that though. There's no suspence. There's no climax. There's no emotion. I understand the dream thing and how it could work, but I'm sorry Kellocx, it just didn't work out this time. Just try and work on some plots with a significant beggining, middle, and end. It took me about twenty different failed scripts until I found one that actually stuck and worked. Work, work, work! Everything else looks good enough so when you do get a really good script, it should come out nicely.
You know what's a fun game? Take 3 Excedrin PM's and see if you can whack off before you fall asleep. You always win, that's the best part about the game. -Cal, [i]The 40 Year Old Virgin[/i]
RE: 15:10
Why didn't you just make a movie on cowboys eating pudding, LOL (South Park)