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rulzrule
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FINALLY FINISHED :D!

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from noncompressed version

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Well, this was my summer project and I think it turned out ok, originated from a 7 page script but most of it was tossed out, rewritten and rethought along the way. The synopsis is basically, a guy trying to commit suicide by overdosing on drugs- no specific type and follows his hallucinogenic adventures through his head. Shot it with a Tell me what you guys think, and comment, need to improve. separated into 4 parts due to youtube compression- should be widescreen.

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http://youtube.com/watch?v=8pa97DmzEeA part 1
http://youtube.com/watch?v=4QwGqMOxjNI part 2
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2yNdSA... part 3
http://youtube.com/watch?v=hOK-U89R98s part 4 (more) (less)
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Interesting...some of it was a bit rough, the running scene was too long I thought and some of the acting wasn't too great. I thought it was quite good it just needed that extra polising. P.S. It's a youtube film(s) so you could put it directly into your post by using [youtube] [/youtube] tags. Good effort 3.5 to 4/5
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Isn't the youtube tag down? I've tried before, around when the MH server was done, and the option disappeared...

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thank ya, finally constructive comments, yeah the acting :P , im working on trying to tap the drama program at my uni through my friend, most my friends wont volunteer their time to be in my movies, thats why i played death haha.
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Isn't the youtube tag down? I've tried before, around when the MH server was done, and the option disappeared...


...Yes. That's bad, very bad...No, but Ornsack has been using it, maybe only the mods can use it now? That's bad, that's very, very, very bad.
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