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Hi guys,

I posted this a few weeks ago as an unfinished article.

After a few touch ups its all finished and done so i thought id post it here to see what you guys think.

Its a short horror about a babysitter alone in the house when something is not quite right.

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http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=XzVfMlcpG-U

Comments and feedback would be much appreciated
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Looks good, I like what you did with it to touch it up.
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Post by camiziodeltoro »

nice girl, but you could have done without the fluffy glow effect
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Post by Magic-Man »

I enjoyed that. It was nicely shot and cut. Good sound mix as well, i liked the grading and acting was very good, except for the mum on the phone, she didn't seem so terrified that there was a clown in her babies room... other than that good job
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Yeah was nicely done! Although could have used a couple more frames on the last shot, it just didn't have time to register with me (although literally only a couple frames more)

Dunno about anyone else but it reminded me of the first scene in Scream with Drew Barrymore =?
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It reminded me of the opening scene in V for Vendetta =?
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