short video ad- ideas/feedback

[peppgum]

Hi!

im making an ad for my gum company-pepp energy gum

my basic idea so far is part of a wheredoyouchew campaign where users can send in pix of themselves chewing peppgum in cool places.

i want to make a skydive ad promoting how i chew it at 10,000 feet etc

heres a rough layout ( i know pretty much 0 about film making)

1
Everyone on ground by plane in jumping gear w thumbs up to 'go' (4 ppl total)

2
On plane hold up peppgum package-everyone chews some peppgum Yumm! Were energized now

3
Jump out of plane falling scene w peppgum branding logo on helmets (2) probably removable vinyl logo done by sign shop

4
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5
Pull chute floating in air and land

6
Group high five at landing site-END

the end sort of sux, what would be a cool ending? maybe show plane explode (like special editing not really)
i dont have an editor yet, if anyone has good editing skills and is interested msg me! this is a pretty low budget thing, id like to keep it around $1000 total.

thanks!