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It just depresses me.... man I hate my life...
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So nobody likes?
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What i read was ok. But, i thought you were writing a script? Is this a book?
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Yeah i agree, from what i read its alright. But as Mr.Anderson said it doesnt sound like a script. You should not just have it like a commentry but have the footage of grotty people sweating over the deepfryer. Have visuals, it will gross people out more, rather than some guy talking about how much he doesnt like it.
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No, I want it to be a novel. I'm not doing it as a movie, it would be too hard. You can't film there. I had it all set up like a novel, but the forum didn't read my indents and such. How is it, novelwise?
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Good, so its a novel, nice work.
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