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Hey guys, I've finished a re-write/revision of the script. There's I believe 10 or 15 more pages now, and I *think* I've taken everyone's suggestions/criticisms into consideration while rewriting--though I wasn't at my home computer for a lot of the rewrite; so if I missed something, just point it out to me again, please!
Here's the new version, in a PDF document for those who want a more readable format than the rest of this post: http://www.deadsignalproductions.com/fi ... tDraft.pdf
And the revised script, in its entirety, is pasted below. Thanks again to everyone who's reading this!
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Here's the new version, in a PDF document for those who want a more readable format than the rest of this post: http://www.deadsignalproductions.com/fi ... tDraft.pdf
And the revised script, in its entirety, is pasted below. Thanks again to everyone who's reading this!
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Last edited by OutcastJiob on Sun Oct 01, 2006 5:54 am, edited 1 time in total.
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