"Compromised"

Bodysnatcher · Post by **Bodysnatcher** » Tue Jul 04, 2006 7:47 pm

would like to see more of this, nicely written I willhave to re-read it again to fix it in my head

OutcastJiob · Post by **OutcastJiob** » Fri Aug 04, 2006 1:36 am

Hey guys, I've finished a re-write/revision of the script. There's I believe 10 or 15 more pages now, and I *think* I've taken everyone's suggestions/criticisms into consideration while rewriting--though I wasn't at my home computer for a lot of the rewrite; so if I missed something, just point it out to me again, please!

Here's the new version, in a PDF document for those who want a more readable format than the rest of this post: http://www.deadsignalproductions.com/fi ... tDraft.pdf

And the revised script, in its entirety, is pasted below. Thanks again to everyone who's reading this!

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Nba185 · Post by **Nba185** » Fri Aug 04, 2006 8:15 am

So this is not the final draft yet?

OutcastJiob · Post by **OutcastJiob** » Mon Aug 07, 2006 10:01 pm

This is probably the last draft, and if it's not, I won't be rewriting for another few months, as another script/story is getting my full attention now.

Nba185 · Post by **Nba185** » Fri Aug 11, 2006 11:23 am

Oh wow. So we've got to wait a long time for the film to be ready.