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RE: New Horror Script

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I think with regards to the format it is just the way it comes out, we are used to readign quirky by now, the script is good and has potential for bigger better things, are you looking at developing this more? you are being very ambitious with your sfx, can you pull them off? and there was a lot of f word use in such a small scene:
JON
Jesus f*** Christ! I’ve never
seen anything like that in my entire
f*** life! That was the most
insane f*** thing!
now I can appreciate the situation the character has just been in, and it's your script but after counting 10 f*** it sort of lost the impact if that makes sense?
all in all I liked it and would be interested to see how you develope it.
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RE: Re: RE: New Horror Script

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i think it would look good without the cgi. if you can pull it off propably. i think the script as a whole has a lot of potential. you could develop it into a neat horror movie with som good scares or just gross stuff either is good
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