"I Ain't Allowed" A New short script.

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"I Ain't Allowed" A New short script.

Post by Holdios » Sat Aug 18, 2007 7:55 am

Would appreciate opinions on this. This story was inspired by the Tom Wait's song "Buzz Fledderjohn's Yard". I'm mostly happy with it, but I do not like the ending. Opinions on that in particular would be very much appreciated.




“I AIN’T ALLOWEDâ€

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