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Pirate script outline (I need your humorous ending)

Post by Zacatac927 » Fri Jun 29, 2007 7:02 pm

Ok, so i wrote this outline of the scipt (Since i hate reading script.. i assume you do to...)

Reynolds a pirate has a map that leads him to a certain island, as he helps crew this pirate ship, he decides to sink the ship and head to the island by himself, as to not have to share the wealth. Well his plan goes awry when Aaron one of the younger crew survives, and Reynolds cannot pull the sword out and kill someone in cold blood, (although he could condemn 40 men locked in the sunken pirate ship). Now Reynolds and Aaron are stuck on a small, long boat and Aaron does not know of Reynolds map and compass, although grows suspicious of his activities as he rows. When they find an island Aaron finally rebels against Reynolds, finding the map and compass. A huge fight takes place from the shore, over the dunes, and onto a small inlet, knee deep. During this fight, Reynolds reveals some of the history of the map and why he's here, what he did to get it. Reynolds is finally taken down and Aaron takes the map and compass and leaves Reynolds to die. Walking away Aaron runs into Castaway (we never learn his name) upon discovering Aaron has the Map Castaway reveals he had been searching for the treasure ever since he washed ashore. So he decides to help lead Aaron to find the treasure. (What Aaron doesn't see is Castaway's large collection of human toes and fingers in his pouch.) Aaron closes in on the treasure, Castaway licks his lips and unsheathes his knife, Aaron, upon hearing this Jumps up and goes to pull out his sword and discovers it is gone, he left it next to Reynolds. Castaway jabs, Aaron ducks, and falls to the ground, Castaway raises a knife and suddenly a sword drives through Castaway's chest. Reynolds pulls it out and pulls Castaway's body over Aaron grabs the knife as points it at Reynolds. Reynolds dismiss' it and puts his sword away. Cut to the beach, Aaron sits next to Reynolds, with the small chest inbetween.


how should it end? I don't want to be cliche..


and input on the outline can be made as well


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RE: Pirate script outline (I need you humorous ending)

Post by Duncanature » Fri Jun 29, 2007 7:17 pm

Have them open the chest and their faces melt off. Then have the chest being wheeled into a room with thousands of crates by some guy.
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Post by Zacatac927 » Fri Jun 29, 2007 7:32 pm

hahaha... nice..

anyone got a serious idea?
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Post by Zacatac927 » Sat Jun 30, 2007 4:25 am

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Post by Zacatac927 » Tue Jul 03, 2007 1:31 am

anyone? Anyone? Bueller? Bueller?
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Post by Knightly » Tue Jul 03, 2007 7:33 am

They sit frustrated after learning that the castaway was the only one with the knowledge of the location of the key.
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Post by Zacatac927 » Tue Jul 03, 2007 12:29 pm

that might actually work... hmmm... i like it
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Post by kene555 » Tue Jul 03, 2007 1:58 pm

They realize that they have an incredible treasure that will make them rich several times over...only to realize that their passage back to the mainland is below the waters...sunk by Reynolds himself.

Getting off the island is another story...sequel? hmm?
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Post by Zacatac927 » Tue Jul 03, 2007 3:33 pm

your hmmm is correct dear kene



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