Charlie and the Calculator Factory (Working Title)

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Charlie and the Calculator Factory (Working Title)

Post by angusware » Sun Jun 17, 2007 11:44 am

Just completed a new script for a Film Competition at my school, link is below

written about 6 hours after returning from Paris (to Hobart in Australia) which meant more than 48 hours traveling, so telling me about spelling mistakes and complete plot holes that you notice would be greatly appreciated if noticed.

it's a sort-of non-climax based film that relies on dialogue, hopefully I can pull it off,
but not sure if it's any good (no point wasting my time if it's cr**)...

enjoy (hopefully)

http://web.mac.com/angus.ware/iWeb/Site ... ulator.htm

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RE: Charlie and the Calculator Factory (Working Title)

Post by angusware » Wed Jun 20, 2007 10:47 pm

anyone?

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RE: Charlie and the Calculator Factory (Working Title)

Post by st.muse » Wed Jul 25, 2007 7:41 am

I read part of it. It was a little confusing, but I liked the characters.

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RE: Charlie and the Calculator Factory (Working Title)

Post by Zac » Wed Jul 25, 2007 9:48 am

i didnt know you lived in tasmania, (do you?)
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RE: Charlie and the Calculator Factory (Working Title)

Post by angusware » Sat Aug 11, 2007 10:12 am

yes!

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