MattHawkins Online - Film Making Forum

first of all, just a little grammar thing, stood should be standing and sat should be sitting unless you describe it in the past. At the end, I think Mike should not kill Katie, because this destroys his image of a person who has just cracked suddenly. He comes across as malicious. Perhaps just befo...

i hate it when you see a fnot on an add and you know the name...it's so geeky...

no.

all current apple mice have a right-click, along with two other buttons...

and I am proud to say that i did have to research that song, i didn't know what it was
(my musical tastes can be salvaged yet!)

Incomplete by The Backstreet Boys.

KultFilms was recognizing the similar 13 y/o girl market...lol

cool.

I'm part of a mobile phone film project and the main theme is "Our city" any ideas on how to represent that concept in an original way?

It's supposed to be a documentary/arty thing, the issue is I don't feel any connection to the city I live in at all...

ideas?

Jperson wrote:Put some tension in one day maybe. Maybe he goes to school with a gun but ends up chickening out.

I do declare thats an awesome idea, make the audience think he's going to kill everyone, and make it something else like the shower scene in schindlers list...

Not great. filming quality and technique not good, script pretty terrible...

beat him up alot, but you need to find a more original idea for the story, tweak it a bit, change the concept around and make it interesting.

not really, they admitted they stuffed up.

same for me on the site, you should speel cheek all your stuff and make sure you're using the right use of where and were.

you spelt entry wrong.

the content was good, not so sure about the presentation of it, the presenters seemed a bit "oprah" and fake...

You're a celebrity! And your dinosaur is awesome...

The camera work was excellent. The only place it where it wan't great was towards the end, it was too dark and I couldn't understadnw aht happened to him. Some of the sounds seemed too up-close and clear, like they weren't attatched to the video, and other parts had a hum noise in it. Other than tha...

switch 4 mac, but you have to buy it.

yeah, tha looks better.

you could offer to shoot it if they pay the camera rental

It was ok. Your use of lightsabers wasn't consistent though, sometimes they were acting as if they were heavy and other times not,
there were also some shots where they were suppod to be running, but you could see them standing still waiting for action.
The 3d ships could use some work too.

well you've sort of avoided any way of anyone helping you, you wont use explosives and wont have something that uses air-pressure.
not really a great and effective solution unless you want the guy to use a syringe or something. Pesticide sprayers are only like $40 bucks anyway.

shoot the bastard.

It looks like you have just found every single effect and used it. intros like this should be much shorter, the people watching it are watching it because they want to see the show, not the introduction and highlights of the show. transitions like crossfade and overlap are much better for this kind ...

it's good. Mkae usre you make the camer and the depth of field smoother, there were some times when it was shaky.

Now all you need to do is apply it to something narrative!

and do us all a favour and put it on youtube...