MattHawkins Online - Film Making Forum

Sounds good.

Yeah, but better. And something in which anyone can participate easily.

an idea would be to have a sorta competition and everyone has 1 or 2 weeks to make a movie of a certain short, simple script, like that one. and then we all vote on whos is the best. just an idea. I like that idea alot! How about we write a really short, loose script, and people can make it any gen...

Does anyone want to produce this script?

ctbullet wrote:ooo i'm intrigued and scared at the same time

i wouldn't mind filming something written by you that everyone on this forum hasn't read yet, to be cheeky

I've got some more comedy scripts, if you'd like to read them.

ctbullet wrote:that was awesome

real original, i chuckeled all the way through, i want to film it!

Thanks. If you really want to. I'd give you the rights to film it.

Here's a comedy short comedy I wrote. NOTE- It may not be obvious in the script, but it is on film. In the beginning of the scene, fillmore begins to exit so many times because he is an idiot and thinks that Jeffrey is telling him to, when he is really talking to the person on the phone. INT. Insura...

Thanks! A fifty year old actor is EXACTLY how I picured Chuck. Glad you saw it too. I think you mean sixties, but I see what you fellas mean by repetition. But, I sort of mean for these to be a little loose. ( I want to explore add libbing to make it sound more conversational. i.e. Tarentino's style...

Looks geat. The music is phonominal. I lolved the actor's fake mustache, It made it a true cop movie.

I don't think finding a cheap one is a good idea nor is making one, I'm pretty sure you can't buy it anywhere legally because it could give you an advantage against armed policemen. American policeman wear kevlar vests under their uniforms. You can definately buy them. You can buy up to class 4 for...

maj_barnes wrote:

F.F.F. wrote:Yes your "friend" did a great job.

Psst. Check the YouTube profile- it ain't mine. Plus, I don't care too much for Star Wars.

Okay, your "friend" has some "good" "videos". "I" like "them."

Yes your "friend" did a great job.

Hey, I liked it.
But with some cool music,it could be so much better.
And, If you wanted to work on those muzzleflashes, I wouldn't stop you.(But from the looks of things, you wont, and I understand, since it was just a little fun thin to do after a hard day at the office.)

Here's a teaser poster I threw together.

See, I wish I could write dialouge like this...however, I am preatty much lacking in that area lol Ah, you'll do alright. But as for costumes, I'm thinking black suits for SHELBY, CHUCK and DANNY, since they're professionals. For Sonny, a track suit? Or at least the jacket of one. And for SONNY'S g...

Thank you. I think the acting really has to be close to perfect for this to work.

Also the title is "The Orphans".

Here's my script for a dialougue driven film. SCENE 1 CUT IN. INT. Car on Urban Street Two men in black suits sit in a car. CHUCK in the Driver's seat and SHELBY in the back seat. SHELBY Hey, Chuck. CHUCK What? SHELBY The M4 is an M16 carbine, right? CHUCK Yeah. SHELBY So why don't they call it the ...

How about doing east and west this time around?

"Bonus points for anyone who can name the film segments incorporated with the last trailer..."
Is it from the Omega Man?

Is there a way to upload the better version?

Yeah, but if I need a baby crying sound effect, I just run up to one and give it candy, then take it away, and then hit the baby on the nose.

Jesus Christ!
That was probably the scariest thing I've seen in a while.
All of the hairs on my legs stood up, and I got major goose bumps. I hope you got a good grade.
But the baby crying just sounded a little too fake, but just barely.

That chick was pretty hot. But what about her personality?

I also caught matthawkins.co.uk on one of the windows.

Ah! Keeping your thread on the front page i see.
I've got nothing to say besides that create/created thing we talked about earlier.