MattHawkins Online - Film Making Forum

Hows come, this movie is just like your last one...lol j/k. There was some good camerawork, other times it was not too great. The fire, well, was fire. I hope you had an extinguisher present. Oh, the guy at the shop with the white shirt, hes definitly your best actor. Ummm....lets see what else....O...

The pics look semi-cool, cept for the first one, you could of done a better job with that, and the makeup looks pretty good.

Yeah, I absolutley love your camerawork. Your gonna go far some day. Good Luck.

I was annoyed by the blueness after the first 3 seconds and your lighting was pretty bad. I recommend using flourescent lights, so you get a whiter more natural look, at times it was way oversaturated.

I'd just skip it all and all, nobody on an ameture budget is going to make a good FF movie.

I had to click like five pages till I finally got to download the file! lol It really doesn't bother me, but I'd work on getting a new file hoster for future reference.

I enjoyed it, and I showed it to my sister thats only 1 year younger than me. She turned away real fast and the scary part and said "Patrick! I'm gonna have nightmares!"

Whenever we have the time to finish it....

I took all the footage we have so far and put together another short trailer. Tell me what you think. Their are 2 versions, a WMV version and a MOV version. Its less than 6 mb. MOV Link - http://brokenstickproductions.com/patrick/downloads/DTVpreview2mov.mov WMV Link - http://brokenstickproductions....

DUDE! AWESOME! Loved the music. Looks like its gonna be pretty funny.

Yeah, not too bad.

I loved the costumes! Also I been looking for that "BAM" sound effect everywhere, you know the one sound that always plays when the guy pops out. The beginning was a bit slow but after that it was pretty sweet.

Nah, see, gelletin, I've tried that, and the consistancy in that really sucks, and it doesn't stick very well, I'd "stick" with the sticky stuff.

After trying lots and lots of blood mixes I have decided that the Karo Syrup blood mix works the best. All you need is a bottle of Karo Light Corn Syrup, a bottle of red food coloring, a bottle of green food coloring, and a bowl to mix it with. Just pour some Karo syrup into the bowl and then some r...

I always seem to get stuck on the way, I never get done by the time I prepare to get done by. So good luck with all that.

Thats pretty sweet, I don't think I've ever been that bored......well ok, maybe I have.....

Epsilon wrote:Go to a cheap thrift shop and buy a Bill Clinton masks. Have a bunch of actors wear the masks. There!

Excellent plan!

Yeah, I do that and also I film high school sports events and then sell them to the team and whoever else wants one, also if you wanted to make money without doing something related a film, get a couple girls, some soap, and a hose, and have yourself a wonderful Saturday of car washing, this could b...

How comes, every move that guy in the white shirt did, was a kick move, thats kinda boring......

Great Movie, nice music selection, well thought of, and well put together, good job. I give it a hardcore 4 thumbs up.

Ok....but I don't understand whats actually so rare about it......

Well, I would compress it to a wmv between 200 and 300 kbps with a variable bit rate. And as for a webspace, Epsilon has a website where you can upload you video, I think he allows 20 megs or so. http://www.matt.echowave.net/

The Business Lunch is a skit I am doing in my speech and debate class, and the other day I was super bored so I super glued a moustache to my face and got all dressed up and acted out all the parts. I personally think it turned out real good, cept for a couple lighting mistakes and like 2 line mista...

I'm all about paying for compositions, when I can afford them, so he's right in every way...thats why my movie "Preeminent Chaos" had such an awesome soundtrack (cause my guitar teacher did the score) but the movie was so bad. lol

Wow....how old are you again??