MattHawkins Online - Film Making Forum

I liked it, I didn't notice the camera angles, which is probably the best cineamatography you can do, the lighting and colour was great!

story was good too.

google?

Good, but no cinematic. Your bent knees and the way you walk isn't great (even though it seems to be part of technique) and yourspare hands should be doing something else...maybe a sheild?

you could also turn your set side-on so you can use it as a dolly.

A better version of the 1812 Overture would be better. Muzzle flashes could be better

So you're not making a film, why would shops want a commercial? Sell it to the company you made it for.

you've got to know people. Not many distribution companies would spend money on someone from matts unless they were the new george lucas (you know, uninnovative?) Try distribution via the internet, using youtube and forums to promote. You could also try and get it onto a public broadcasting channel ...

sounds about right, with maybe a couple of people around just to do random stuff...

or beat them up and steal their lunch money

Definately remember a trpod.

amen.

To be honest that was COMPLETELY F**KING AWESOME!!! The only thing I should point out for the trailer is that you probably shouldn't show her shooting and him yelling, because it looks like she kills herself and then she comes back to life. This is the most professional short film i've ever seen tha...

It was ok, He came across as a bit of a freak. I wouldn't call this a comedy because it wasn't funny, but it was ok. His toast was well written.
Why were they all talking with accents?

I have to agree with Lawriejaffa, but that doesn't mean this wasn't enjoyable!

He means you twirl more bamboo between takes, and we can see your reflection of you doing this in the main characters breastplate in scene 12 (the one where he battles the dragon with only a toothpick)

yeah, or post them at production companies and things...

tallman_house_pictures wrote:Loved it!
Good 'ol Utah acting.

erm...what? How is acting defined by location?

Find a friend and beg them.

9.Check the Wikipedia pafge on Euthanasia, because the final text at the end is innacurate. Because everyone knows Wikipedia is 100% accurate. Nice script, some grammar problems, but the story was good. The voice overs seem long, what footage/shots will it be under? I learned (the hard way) that pe...

I want your camera.

There are companies that do this kind of thing. Not that this helps this particular issue but : http://dvd-subtitles.com/

Why don't you try mixing dirt, a bit of water and waterproof PVA together and moulding and drying it onto a hook? I don't know if this would work, but it might...

try http://www.3dcafe.com they've changed the site around so I can't remember where it all is.

I would if I could, but I'm not flying to london until June. I'm going to see the blue man group (among other things).