MattHawkins Online - Film Making Forum

All looks great...

Woops, I mean Epsilon, sorry. 4th Post down. I was just pointing out that actually the companies that make the operating system do actually also make software.

angusware wrote:Some of the dialogue seems... laboured and very fake.

Exactly what I was saying with the "Catch" moments, like they snag on something, almost, and just feel, well, uncomfortable and laboured.

Nice.

Urg. OK, I'll feed back on the little bit I reado. OK, nice. Do you like writing, you're obviously quite good at it. The script flows most of the time, except for a few uncomfortble "catch" moments, which even (I know it's hard to take ;) ) I write in. It's so hard to avoid when writing in...

^Effect and causse. angusware, lol, it is so much quicker just doing that than quoting, wow, I'm a different person. Anyhow, I think you should call the film the "Human Rights Activist Salad". Hmm...

Nice...thanks all for the help. Here's another idea, how about selling on Google Video (it has a price thing) which could work... I'm not sure, what do you think? But, yeah, I'll be taking into account all your suggestions. At the mo, for me, making money is easiest done by doing commissions for fri...

Niiiiiiiiiice. I wanna see the film. Good editing as well and nice shots. Sounds like good acting and (is this possible on Matt's?) a good script...

I was just thinking that.

Just by a Mac. And by the way Gyro ("so, Windows and MAC are operating systems. They don't make the software."). I think you'll find Apple do make Final Cut Pro. Also Windows make a bunch of cr**. ALSO! All Macs and Apple desktops (I'm not sure about laptops) come with a 4 button mouse + a...

Nice. Except there is no way my "school" would let me do that...they're generally evil.

I used to keep it all on my computer but I only have 150gigs storage so I recently burnt most of my short films to archive computer-only dvds. I'm currently looking into getting an extra 1TB (terabyte, sounds cool huh? :mosh:).

Right i wasn't sure which category to put this in, but since 'General Film Making Stuff' is going through a popular period I'll use this one: How do you go about selling DVDs? I'm considering for the film I'm working on right now. I'm London, UK, by the way. I also happen to be great friends with th...

Good, nice varied, shots, great tension, great filming from outside. Good blade flash at the camera. That was all great. However at the beggining it was slightly unsteady in parts (I'm talking about the inside shots, not the ones you did on purpose slightly shaky outside). I presume you don't have a...

^ I like angusware's post.

Yeah, good link NBA.

Yeah, no he should kill her like Nero killed is first wife. He just goes up to here and is really angry and starts just punching her, then she falls over and starts kicking her, and he's like really incensesed. Then he realises what he's done and breaks down like crying next to her, like he didn't m...

Yeah, I think leaving skool at 16 is a bad move. You can't go to uni, really, afterwards. I mean it may be sure tempting, but I really would advise you to stay at skool till you're 18.

The point of this is, really though, to provide a place which people can use to share their "in editing" pieces around and get help from others. Not just one project. I also am a strong believer that eveything put in the "Members' Films" section should be put in one place, so the...

Yeah. I'm in total agreement.

You're leaving school at 16? *raises eyebrow*

It should be 'do your parents suppost you?' or 'does your mum support you?' tut! My parents didn't really know about it at first but as soon as they knew the full extent of my invovlment they were really supportive. Splashed over £160 this Xmas on editing software (and they bought me loads of oth...

Right that sounds very good. Except I'm quite bogged down with stuff at the moment, so I won't be able to do it immeaditely, but I"m definetly up for giving it a go... I'll add it to my growing list! edit: Also how about a working title for the project? some stupid corporate thing such as colla...

Lol, yeah I could set up forums 'n' blogs 'n' other things for people. Make it sound harder than it is, you mean, basically? Very good.

Notes While Watching: (Spoiler, so to see I'm using A Matt technique, highlight) Not too keen on the music. Nice, you used a dog :D. What salary did the dog get? When the artist was filming it repeated the same sort of shots about 50 times! Nice strafing overhead shot. Nice use of hospital location....