MattHawkins Online - Film Making Forum

Everyone has had long enough. It doesn't take that long to write a first draft of a script!

Hi mate, here is my review: The Good: The script was well written. Very good acting. This goes hand in hand with the one above, as the lines wouldn't have been half as effective if the actors weren't good enough. They really breathed life into their parts. Beautiful Lighting. So important for mood a...

rhys wrote: Its because i put ALOT of thought into what I'm going to make a story about.

Don't think too hard and for too long Rhys, you might burst a blood vessel or something!

I now can't wait for your film - with all the thinking time and tests you do I'm expecting the world!!!

I thought I would add ours on here:

www.orkneymoviegroup.co.uk


Thank you.

Well here is mine. I have had this idea jotted down for a while. thought it would suit this competition. I wrote this in a couple of hours, so it might have spelling mistakes. FRIEND IN NEED, FRIEND INDEED Draft 1 1. EXT. NIGHT. CAR PARK B. A dead man lies on his back on the cold tar of the Car Park...

Hi Everyone,

Just to let you know propeller will be broadcasting our film on SKY channel 195 as part of the next 5 week schedule.

Our film will be transmitted on Saturday 23rd at 22:15 (Premiere Night)

I hope you can watch. Thanks.

Hi Everyone,

Just to let you know propeller will be broadcasting our film on SKY
channel 195 as part of the next 5 week schedule.

Our film will be transmitted on Saturday 23rd June at 22:01 (Premiere Night)

I hope you can watch. Thanks.

I wonder if this Zombie film 'The Rising' is the same as the book I read by Brian Keene. It says on his website that both of his books (The Rising and the sequel City of the Dead) are in Production. http://www.briankeene.com/ If you like zombie stories then these books are a must. I couldn't put the...

I'm 25, and the baby is my daughter. We have four films on here in total: Trepidation Out of this World Quirk of Fate A Scream in the Night. The phone ringing was actually taken off of a mobile phone. Oh well. Yes I wrote and Directed this film. With amateur actors starring in our films I like to wr...

The scene in the dealer's home was good. It was shot well with there drinking and his singing, very funny. But, one major problem that you should look into for future projects is lighting. One moment the lighting is fine, then they're in shadow. The other thing I noticed was sound. One shot was fine...

- And about the smoking... Sorry, but what? That is the most ridiculous criticism, ever. The characters smoke. End of. Why? They just do. Does it really p** you off this much every time you see a movie with someone smoking in it? The way I normally work criticism is for one statement listen to it, ...

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Considering I watch and review other's films please review mine.

Thank you.

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Considering I watch and review other's films please review mine.

Thank you.

youngfilmmaker wrote:Wow DarkElastic,

I am sorry, No need to scream at me. =[

Thank you Youngfilmmaker. I never scream, just ask.

Nice film mate. Its meaning was clear without any talking. It was a pleasure to watch. I thought the music fit, but always a shame when its not your own, or you've not gained the copyright.

Keep it up.

youngfilmmaker wrote:Also if the target viewers are spanish or english you might want subtitles. I know spanish so I could understand it, so that is an suggestion.

I understood it and I don't speak spanish. No subtitles are necessary.

The Good: Nice array of shots. Good acting. Good tension building. Great ending!!! The bad: Nothing fresh in your idea. Some of the shots had awkward zooms in them. Overall a good film. This is a nice platform to build off to create something a but more challenging in script terms. Great ending, I w...

I concur.

Yes, mother does support, and most of my family and friends. They buy and watch our films to help the group.

As an amateur production that was entertaining. The Good: The acting. The script. Good characters that will hopefully develop well. You had some nice shots in there. Especially your establishing shots. Nice music. The Bad: Lighting between shots. You are trying to light things enough to see clearly ...

The Good: Nice shots. Especially the montage at the beginning. Sound was mainly good. Acting was good. A lot of people involved always adds realism to certain scenes. The Bad: There was a jump in sound when the lad joined him on the roof. The smoking was fine in the pub, but everyone in your film sm...

Come on people. Not one of you has bothered to watch and review this film yet!!!!

We're meant to be a community on this site who strive to help one another, and receive help in return!!!

It was OK, a bit of fun. I thought the Cat was great, and should be upping its contract in its next film!!! I liked the Cat view shots. I thought a couple of other shots needed some lighting. I didn't like the music choice at all. It was too much for such a short, little film. Overall, a nice little...

Great News!!!

Quirk of Fate is now online.

CLICK ON THE LINK BELOW AND THE FILM IS HIDDEN ON THE MOVIE POSTER

Clue - Remember them.

http://www.orkneymoviegroup.co.uk/project_qof.html

Please watch and review.

Thanks

I don't know as I am more of a script writer, Producer, Director in the group. But I do know it is a Canon and it is a semi-professional one.